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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Congrats to the DD! 
First and foremost thank you for participating in the Critique Extravaganza for Project Educate! We appreciate it! I am here to offer you a critique on your art that you have requested to be looked at!
You did an excellent job on the details of the fur and direction of fur/hair. I would like to make a suggestion as far as the arm (besides its length). At the base, it's in the spot where the extra long 'hair' comes down to the elbow (which I think you did great with the direction of the hair as well as the highlights and shading). I'm not sure if this was meant to be there or not but it looks like you might still have some of the line art visible? There is a defined black line that goes half way down and up to the other-side. I would recommend removing that and replacing it with the color of the highlights/shadows of the hair itself instead of being a black line; as this makes it feel out of place.
As others have suggested, the arm does look a little too long for the rest of the torso but you mentioned in your description you where going to work on that! <3
I would also recommend maybe adding a little more detail to the hair along the back. It looks great but I think you could add a few more strands of highlights/shading to it as you have done with the hair at the top of the head.
For the background: Maybe add some more details to the right far side of the tree. You did a great job with the highlights you might want to define it a little more with a strong yellowish color as I feel the tree kind of fades into nonexistence.
All in all a beautiful job on this unique piece! I love those antlers and the beautiful web within. This really is a beautifully executed piece and a sheer joy to look at. Thank you for sharing your talents with us!
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